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[Story Rebel Digest] Road-mapping


Hey rebels!

I'm helping a book coaching client outline her nonfiction book this week (we’re smack in the middle of the Story Map Intensive part of the book coaching engagement), so my mind is buzzing with ways to organize a book. Hence the deep dive topic.

It got me thinking about how each sub-genre of nonfiction has its own unique flavor—a topic I'd love to delve into for a future post.

Have you read any nonfiction books that blew your mind lately? I'd love to include reader faves in my roundup.

I'm currently reading Murderland by Caroline Fraser, and while it's far too graphic for me to comfortably recommend (or even read, tbh) I'm fascinated by the narrative style. Fraser quilts together snippets of scenes in a way that reminds me of Eduardo Galeano's Memory of Fire trilogy—blending geology, industrial history, and true crime to make her argument that widespread lead, arsenic, and cadmium poisoning from the mining industry in the Pacific Northwest led to an increase in violence (particularly serial killers).

I definitely need a palate cleanser after this book, though. Shoot me your recommendations!

—JK

IN THIS ISSUE:

  • "Mother Tongue"
  • How to outline nonfiction
  • Industry events not to miss!
  • Join us for the Q1 Story Rebel mixer on March 20th!

🎙️ I was asked to be one of the judges for Spoken's "Your Story" contest. Spoken is a platform that helps authors bring their words to life with AI narrators—including voice actors who've licensed their voices and get paid per use. (You may remember my recent tutorial about using Spoken to create an AI voice clone of my own voice for a nonfiction project.)

The "Your Story" contest was meant to highlight the personal stories behind the fiction—as a judge, I was asked to score entrants on three different things: the content of their short story, the technical excellence of the narration, and the author's personal note.

It was a fascinating exercise. I'll let you know when they announce the winners, but I wanted to highlight one of my own personal favorites: Mother Tongue by Antoinette Klimek. It's about a 45-minute listen, and it kept me hooked every minute.

How to Outline a Nonfiction Book

There’s no hard and fast rule that you need to outline your non-fiction book before you start writing. But here’s why I think you should:

  • Outlining lets you spot problems before you’ve spent weeks or months working on a draft that’s headed in the wrong direction.
  • Outlining strengthens your argument and focus before you even start writing.
  • Outlining gives you a roadmap that keeps you on track (and making progress).
  • But most of all, outlining makes writing a nonfiction book feel way more manageable.

Some people find outlining reassuring—it makes the book more concrete. Others find it constricting—they want to explore as they write! If you’re in the latter camp, don’t worry. You’re not locked into anything; the outline is just a guide.

I like to think of a nonfiction book outline as a route suggestion.

I’m I’m planning a road trip from Portland to Chicago, I’ll rough out my route ahead of time. As I get going, though, I’ll come across road closures. I’ll hear about interesting new locations I want to visit. I’ll get a great deal on a hotel somewhere off the main route.

My route will change along the way—what won’t change is the destination.

In the same way, your outline will change and shift. You’ll refine it as you go.

But having that route suggestion in place before you head out will save you tons of stress along the way.

Let’s dig in.

First, a Caveat

There are many types of nonfiction books, but they fall into two larger categories.

Is your book meant to be more informational and expository? Or is it a narrative non-fiction piece that tells a specific linear story from start to finish?

Examples of the former include most self-help or educational books like The War of Art by Steven Pressfield, The Big Leap by Gay Hendrix or my own From Chaos to Creativity. Almost any business or self-help book is going to fall into this category.

Narrative nonfiction books include personal memoir, business memoir, and history books. These are (generally) structured much more like a novel would be, with an inciting incident, rising action, a mirror moment, doors of no return, etc.

Keep in mind that memoir doesn’t necessarily need to be told in order, either. There are plenty of successful collections of memoir essays (think, David Sedaris) or memoirs told in more advance literary forms (like Carmen Maria Machado’s In the Dream House).

I’ll tackle narrative nonfiction in a later post. In this essay, I’m going to be talking specifically about outlining self-help, business books, and other educational nonfiction.

1. Get Clear On Your Book’s Promise

What are you trying to say, and who are you trying to say it to? Nailing this can be the most difficult part of the outlining process, because when you first start thinking of writing a book, the idea will probably be very amorphous.

For example, when my current book coaching client and I first started talking about her project, she had multiple audiences in mind.

On the one hand, she wanted to speak to individuals and help them using the methodology from her day-to-day business.

On the other hand, she’s passionate about certain things her industry gets wrong, and wanted this book to educate other business owners.

The more we talked about, though, the more she realized the biggest lift would be in helping individuals. This doesn’t mean the book won’t be useful to other business owners in her industry—just that we’ve chosen a single audience to focus on.

Which let us choose a single message to convey with the book.

—> Read the rest on the Story Rebel blog.

🤝 Author Nation's Virtual Industry Expo will be April 12 from 11-2pm Central. It's the first time they've done something like this, and it looks like a great opportunity to connect with publishing industry vendors and get your questions answered.

How it works (from their site):

  • 3-hour open house format
  • Each vendor will have an assigned breakout room
  • Pop in and out as your schedule allows — you can stay 10 minutes or the whole time!
  • All attendees will automatically be entered into our raffle prize drawing. We will email folks after the Expo ends to connect winners with vendors so they can redeem their prizes.

✒️ Will you be attending the virtual Nonfiction Writers Conference? It's May 6-8, and they've been announcing some really fantastic speakers (including the fabulous Joanne McCall, a book publicist who spoke both years at my Author Alchemy Summit!). I'm extremely excited that Mike Michalowicz will be the opening speaker. If you haven't read his books on business, Profit First and The Pumpkin Plan both made a huge impression on me. Highly recommend.

🎉 The next Story Rebel Mixer will be March 20th at 12pm Pacific/3pm Eastern. Come hang out and meet other members of the community! This will be a casual virtual mixer with some light structure to break the ice and give everyone a chance to chat. Depending on group size, we may break into smaller rooms for part of the call.

We had a really wonderful time last December, and I'm looking forward to chatting with you all! Register here.

Talk soon,

JK

Written by Jessie Kwak

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